Thursday, June 8, 2017

Manuscript submission

Yesterday, I clicked the submit button to send my manuscript for review.  Enough thinking about it for ages and ages.  Serendipity struck about a year ago when B gave me a book called The Best Travel Writing Volume 11 published by Travelers' Tales, an imprint of Solas House in Palo Alto, CA.

I checked their website and decided to submit.  It took me a year to stop fiddling with a word here and a word there. And to forget the comments from an agent, "I can't sell this."

Anyway, it's off and perhaps that bit of momentum will result in further submissions of work that has been waiting and waiting.

Here is one of the short reflections from my manuscript, One Foot on the Ground: Wandering, Collecting, Arriving, Savoring, Waiting, Transforming, Returning

Off Itinerary: Saying “Yes”

Destination no longer ruled.  My only map was that of free association:  I would follow each street only as long as it interested me and then, on a whim, choose a new direction.
Alice Steinbach
  
I said “Yes” to an early morning walk around Xuanwu Lake Park with Christopher and Kate.  We met at 6 am and Christopher asked me if I was hungry.  What’s the right answer to this?  I sensed it was “Yes” and I was right.  They wanted to take me for street food breakfast.  We walked toward the university until we came upon a woman who was setting up her cart.  She was pulling small snowball sized lumps of dough off a large bucket full of dough in the lower part of her cart.  She set out various containers of filings and checked the fire under her wide flat pan.  We watched for a minute or two and then Kate spoke to her.  Nodding seemed to indicate that she was ready to begin. She spread the dough over the pan and then cracked an egg over the dough. With a broad spatula she spread the egg over the dough.  As these set and became a crepe of sorts, she spread the vegetables Kate indicated over the egg.  Finally, she folded this tortilla into a roll and placed it in a thin plastic bag for holding.  By the time she had made one each for the three of us, a second and third cart had arrived on the scene and quickly set up for business. Each was a slightly different variety of the same thing.  I could imagine that a worker or student might have a favorite cart for breakfast every day—one and only favorite out of these three and the dozens more we saw as we rode in a taxi to the lake.  The top few bites were crepe only, but below that it was a crunchy, soft, wrap around oily veggies for a very satisfying finger-licking good breakfast if you can let go of dry toast as a standard.  2 RMB each, about 30 cents.
The taxi dropped us off at one entrance gate to the lake park.  A group of adults were doing tai chi with red flags just outside the arched opening in the old city wall.  We entered and made a plan to walk the forest route and then the island route. There are broad wooden walkways through the forest and people are doing morning exercise routines alone and together.  They move to the same principles, if not the same rhythm/drummer, in harmony and community, yet each may be doing something individual.  A man plays his trumpet to a tree.  A woman stretches at a bench, couples walk briskly, small groups move through different forms of tai chi or chi gong.  A man uses tree branches to do pull ups over a small water feature.  It is 6:20 am.  Someone plays a flute; someone else is doing primal screams, and a sole woman is singing opera to the lake.  She has a beautiful voice, and I think the beauty of the lake owes something to the vibrations she infuses.
The care and artistry of setting is stunning here and almost everywhere else we went.  There is not just simply a row of bushes along the highway—there is usually an array with depth and texture.  Lower plantings in front, with medium thick hedges framing shaped trees or contrasting hedges of medium height and then one or two rows of trees standing taller behind.  This would be along the highway.  This level of quality in a park would be arrayed in groupings rather than along a road.  The difference in the park is the inclusion of height and stone.  Beautiful “scholar rocks” are cultivated near Lake Xuanwu  by putting “seed” stones into cracks in the rock and then allowing the agitating action of the water to shape a variety of openings in the rock. The result is a three-dimensional stone lace. Nature and artistry, one and the same.

China, 2012

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